Xjordanary's Eztoons

OK heres some of my early animations:








PLease let me know what you think

pretty good, on fluidity and easing you excel, but you need to really focus more on physics and anticipation

I think you need to work on easing and physics. The art is very good.

Thanks for the advice. I'll be very sure to practice!

What about this one:



What do you think?

that is godly

Yeah , It's great storyline , but haven't action .

Rage. wrote:Yeah , It's great storyline , but haven't action .

Dont worry the actions coming!!! this, so far, is simply an extended intro. I have changed the sword bit to hime starting to run and then jumps and they commense fighting. After that they end up in a city blowin lots of stuff up so dont worry lots of action to come

Update:

Sorry i havnt had time to work much on it but heres a bit more

Just need to sort out some of the kinks in the running (Dont worry i know they are there

Wow, that's excellent, you're quite close to adept.

Zackfire wrote:Wow, that's excellent, you're quite close to adept.

Thanks Zackfire mean alot.. the RSI from my rusty old mouse hurst a little less now XD
Seriously though what would it take to get into adept? Perhaps a couple more of similar quality animations that show off different animation techniques?

P.S You will see a large improvement in my animations (Hopefully) In August when i get my tablet yay ;D

You're exactly right, looking forward to it.

Improvements eh? If this is what you've got with a mouse I just can't imaging how great your animations would be with a Tablet, Keep it up man