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    Xjordanary23

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    Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Xjordanary23 on Tue Jun 09, 2009 6:35 pm

    OK heres some of my early animations:








    PLease let me know what you think Smile


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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Zans on Wed Jun 10, 2009 2:52 am

    pretty good, on fluidity and easing you excel, but you need to really focus more on physics and anticipation
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by AsSeenOnTV on Wed Jun 10, 2009 10:40 am

    I think you need to work on easing and physics. The art is very good.
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Xjordanary23 on Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:30 pm

    Thanks for the advice. I'll be very sure to practice!

    What about this one:



    What do you think?
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by AsSeenOnTV on Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:50 am

    that is godly
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Rage. on Sat Jun 20, 2009 7:41 pm

    Yeah , It's great storyline , but haven't action .
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Xjordanary23 on Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:37 pm

    Rage. wrote:Yeah , It's great storyline , but haven't action .

    Dont worry the actions coming!!! Wink this, so far, is simply an extended intro. I have changed the sword bit to hime starting to run and then jumps and they commense fighting. After that they end up in a city blowin lots of stuff up so dont worry lots of action to come Very Happy
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Xjordanary23 on Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:14 pm

    Update:

    Sorry i havnt had time to work much on it but heres a bit more Smile

    Just need to sort out some of the kinks in the running (Dont worry i know they are there Wink

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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Zackfire on Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:45 am

    Wow, that's excellent, you're quite close to adept.
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Xjordanary23 on Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:46 pm

    Zackfire wrote:Wow, that's excellent, you're quite close to adept.

    Thanks Zackfire Smile mean alot.. the RSI from my rusty old mouse hurst a little less now XD
    Seriously though what would it take to get into adept? Perhaps a couple more of similar quality animations that show off different animation techniques?

    P.S You will see a large improvement in my animations (Hopefully) In August when i get my tablet yay ;D
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by Zackfire on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:03 pm

    You're exactly right, looking forward to it.
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    Re: Xjordanary's Eztoons

    Post by unwanted on Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:45 am

    Improvements eh? If this is what you've got with a mouse I just can't imaging how great your animations would be with a Tablet, Keep it up man Very Happy

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