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    nrocha20

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    nrocha20's Poetry

    Post by nrocha20 on Tue May 26, 2009 1:22 am

    http://roachpoetry.blogspot.com/

    When I saw art as a section, I assumed it was just for art (ex paintings, drawings, ect...). Anyway, this is a blog for my poetry.
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    Re: nrocha20's Poetry

    Post by Zackfire on Wed Jun 10, 2009 11:25 am

    Interesting ideas, but the storytelling is pretty bad. There was some good word choice for the most part, but I did have an issue with a thing or two. Blight isn't really used to mean misfortune. Also, there was a spelling error or three, but that doesn't matter much. I'm glad to see the effort, but improve your word choice a little bit, and try not to lose the reader.

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